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Wow!! Those are really good! Way Hay your from Scotland too! YEAH! ~Lollipop~

Heehee! This poem has good imigary! But if I were you, I would capitilize your "i"s. Makes it sound more poemish! Great work though! :D ~Lollipop~

OHHHHHHHH! Scaweeee! Good cliffhanger! ~Lollipop~

Devil :evil: :twisted:

My eyes are a sort of bluey, grey colour. I dont know. Some people say there green! ~Lollipop~

Hey thanks GriffenKeeper. I think I'll use your re-write on thw whip bit.! And I'll change my mistakes.

Hey guys. Next chapter. I like this one the best! Its in italics when Kalaban is speaking in elf language. Enjoy! :D ********************************************************************************* â

OMG! That is sooooo great. I love it. Its funny ~Lollipop~

OMG!!! I think this is a beautiful poem. Its exppresive but also gives you a good image in your head of what's going on! Well done!! ~Lollipop~

Cool! Maybe we think alike! ~Lollipop~

Heehee! It;s sooo cool!

I liked this! Good good! Lots of emotion!! ~Lollipop~ :D

Wow I loved this. I liked the conversation between Karen and her boss. Naughty language!

Do you think I do? Cool! Heehee! Maybe now I can sneak into adult movies/ Heheheeee! ~Lollipop~

Heres the view you get from inside my house of the front drive!! Hee ~lollipop~