Loller65

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Name - Alistair Gender - Male Age - 25 Race - Human Appearance - Average height, weight. Short black hair, with a slight beard, like this. Skills - he's mediocre ...

Inception was the best film all year. Shutter Island was great too. Toy Story 3 was great too.

Sighing, I took the gun from him. "Now, let's say you just fired this gun and emptied it. You need to reload. So, you'll do this." I pressed a small ...

I looked at the guy with the injured leg. To be honest, it was kind of crazy trying to get a gun with an injury like that. "Let me do ...

((@Cspr-I was talking to KJ.))

Cold, I stand alone. The edge is as close as I get To you. I don’t understand this. I don’t know how to be there, How to say it, How ...

((It certainly seems different...)) I slung the Mini-14 over my shoulder and clambered through the window. I looked around. They were searching for supplies. Admittedly, I needed some, but I ...

It wasn't supposed to be persuasive. It was just my take on things. Just a rant. "I just do" is not supposed to sound persuasive, it was meant solely to ...

As I neared the apartment with the young woman, I noticed a small cluster of seven or eight of the things in front of the building. I dropped to my ...

Shameless self bump for improved reviewing policy. I will review any poetry (yes, any) and short stories. No novels. I don't have the time to read 20 chapters of the ...

A/N-This isn't in response to the "10- reasons why women are better than men" or whatever, just something I've had bouncing around for awhile...oh, and I don't care if this ...

I think this one kind of looses its touch after the sixth or seventh stanzas so if you have any tips then PLEASE help!! BTW you can check out my ...

put a reapating word in there so it brings in beat if you know what i mean? Yeah, I get it. And thanks for all the positive feedback, guys. I ...

Today I watched you. For like, half an hour. No, seriously. I did. I just, sat there, staring at you for what seemed like forever. Something just made me want ...