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Re: The Rangers of Evandor
Alistair ducked low and lay flat against Alejandro's back to keep from getting fried from another blast of flame. "Yow! Couldn't you duck a little lower a little sooner?" Oh, ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: The Rangers of Evandor
Alistair lopped of the head of an orc and looked about. They were starting to overwhelm him. Thinking strategically, he fell back to the dragon's carcass. There was a female ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: The Rangers of Evandor
Satisfied, Alistair licked his fingers. Alejandro sat in front of the fire Alistair'd made, preening himself. "I don't usually go for carrion bird, but that was pretty good. What did ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
7/10 Funny, I liked it. I judo-chopped the bear's neck with full force, sending him sprawling.
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Give a Summary, Make a Title
A story about a veteran who returns from Vietnam an amputee and the downward spiral his life takes due to PTSD. Good Night and Good Luck
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Poem
It's just a poem about a lonely dude in the zombie apocalypse.
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Username
Uh, I went to edit account setting and such, because I want to change my username. For some reason, I can't. Do I require a tonne of points to do ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Aw Snap, Reviews!
Done! Next?
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Poem 2
thanks for the reviews, you two! I think that "G'night" is more appropriate, because "Night" just sounds a little weird without referencing what it's supposed to be shortening. Just a ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Poem 2
RATATATATATATA Stop. RATATATATATATA Stop. RATATATATATATA What the hell do you people want? RATATATATATATA Stop. RATATATATATATA Friendly fire isn't. RATATATATATATA Fragmentation grenades work both ways
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)
I'd sure appreciate it if you'd review my dramatic poem "Poem" for me!
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Abandon
Well, for starters, grammar and spelling wasn't too much of an issue, so congratulations. Now, for the rest. The whole story, to me, felt too vague to have any impact. ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Aw Snap, Reviews!
Reviewed! Who's next?
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: The Rangers of Evandor
Alistair walked among the dead orcs scattered about. Alejandro followed him, stepping gingerly over the bodies. Sir, why exactly are we picking them over? Alistair sighed. He still couldn't find ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Feelings?
Feelings are like .... (I feel those periods could have been taken out and had the passage be just as effective) political leaders. (humorous) You never know what they will ...
Jan 11, 2011