Loller65

Heya! Since you're cool, and I'm cool, you should review this! Thanks in advance, pal!

This is...this is not good. It's riddled with grammatical and spelling errors the plot is bland, there was a sudden, unexpected swear word. It's got a sort of stereotypical plot. ...

Thurber from Behind The Scenes Thurber awoke in a dimly lit room. He swung his legs off of a cool metal operating table. He yawned lazily. He didn't know how ...

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Well, uh...that was awesome. I mean...that was so awesome. I adored it. I only have one nitpick with it. I loved the thing he had going with Crow and I ...

Thurber Washington Ouch. The ginger named Ginger disrespected my morning suit. Morning suits were the epitome of elegance and refined taste! I headed over to give her a piece of ...

Here as requested! For starters, I didn't like the paragraphs. Doesn't hurt the story, just sort of weird to me. The name Jakil sounds like a man's name. Didn't like ...

Fer the RSG contest. 863 words. For the 13-17 age bracket. Your story is about a doctor in a futuristic space station watching ballet. Dave sat in the communications room. ...

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Thurber Washington I breezed through JFK and into LAX. The flight was short, thank goodness, and before I knew it, Micky was somehow already there, escorting me into a limo. ...

OOC: I don't want this SB to die! Red The drunkard got back on the bus, along with the tomboy looking thing and Drea. The drunk and the tomboy were ...

OOC: Oh RoryLegend...I am absolutely in love with Karen Gillan. Thurber I sat in the café, absentmindedly browsing the CWCki on my phone. It rang. It was Micky, my agent. ...

Name: Thurber Washington Roll: Kennis Age: 28 Appearance: Personality: Thurber is often loud and abrasive and used to doing whatever the hell he wants. He is used to being the ...

This is not bad, not bad at all. "You’ll get lost. Not to mention-" lol'd at that bit. I didn't think it was as creepy as everyone else did. See...I ...

I'll do a couple...but they won't be really long and detailed or anything. Yep....