Logan455

thanks for reading people of the YWS this is just sort of a pilot you might say by the next short there will be a much bigger plot please follow ...

Taking the first shot is an advantage in any battle situation but combining that with the element of surprise is even better. Amgon, Eulan, and Kitra knew this well; they ...

Good when i started reading and i saw that half of your story was just a description of a troll i was sort of like what? but now that i ...

i liked your poem a lot it felt go to speak came off my lips smoothly i do think there was one place where it fell dead of awkward for ...

i liked it, but i am not much of a poet so i really don't know much about the way the words are supposed to flow or anything but i ...

well the writing was good it flowed well and all pleasing to read you could say, but i thought it was lacking i mean it really was a "short" story ...