Liz

I liked the casual tone of the poem. Angst, angst, piss, bitch, moan, Yeah, that was kind of...I don't know, I didn't like it. Rage in their simmering cesspools Deep ...

Yeah, you need to work on the flow. Give me some consolation For what you've done to me Allow me to feel like I deserve to know Why I don't ...

The jagged edges of last year didn't really sink into this year. The colours of everything just clashed and made the most horrible noises, but there was nothing I could ...

walking on red, stained snow others walk on gritty pavement i try to though i fall through the cracks and my screams are the faintest, most pitiful fingerprints on the ...

yes, total stranger, i resorted to attempting telepathy two nights ago, when the silence was cutting, unforgiving, threatening to plunge my mind into insanity before long. so i thought, a ...

Yeah, it's all linked under a common theme. They have different times because they're supposed to be about seperate times, although all about one specific time the person is going ...

This is all one poem, I'm not posting 9 at once. i had I LOVE YOU scratched i had I LOVE YOU scratched across my throat in black ballpoint and ...

:( You know what I mean. I really liked this is there anymore to it or is it just a short story kind of thing? Yeah, it's an allegory. Basically ...

I really liked this is there anymore to it or is it just a short story kind of thing? Yeah, it's an allegory. Basically it demonstrates the high flash of ...

1. Boston 52 You can see everything that is inside reflected in the window if it's past five-thirty on a winter's night, and the light in the room is on. ...

:( Nate says not to give huge descriptions of your poetic intentions when posting, as that really doesn't give the strongest impression of a true writer. And I agree with ...

I quite liked this one; it was simple and yet the emotion really shone through. Not overloaded with unnecessary stuff. Sometimes it's nice to just read a simple poem like ...

I thought the rhyme scheme worked well and the flow turned out pretty well. Good job for not sinking to the horrible cliche level. :)

Please, please. COME BACK AND Please, please. COME BACK AND wait for me. PLease, PLease. flittering birds Flitter Across Palm trees' shadows. Hinterland sings with glitter pink LYRICS. Inky lyrics ...

Thanks for the comments :) :D Her outfit is my pajamas, and yeah she's meant to be unique. The whole thing is basically symbollic and a comment on human nature ...