Liz

I used to. It was for about 2 years but I stopped about nine months ago and I am glad I did. To be honest, I will smoke the occassional ...

wow. neuf like pont neuf (meaning new but i guess in this case new and nine mean the same thing). it's so supremeupliftingpainfulicyignorantluckydiamond imagining madameandmonseiurthirion and their tw

Good concept. It's solid and understandable. But think...how often has the whole jumping off a cliff metaphor been used? I think you've put a new twist on it though, following ...

Yeah, the elipses need to be taken out. You also have some dodgy cliches which need to be reworked. You act like I'm invisible Someone else in shadow Someone you ...

Does any one know if the tongue hurts a lot? A couple of my friends have it done but I wouldn't trust them to give me an honest opinion... And ...

So...what's the deal? What do you have done and what do you want to get done? I've got two in each ear and a very infected, closed up belly button ...

1) Starting time: 5:19 2) Full Name: Elisabeth...thats all ur gettin 3) Nickname: Liz/ Slim. lol 4) School: KHS 5) Email: look it up :) 6) Eyes: blue 7) Height: ...

Mesh and Areida: you guys are hothothot! You both have gorgeous hair :D jealous.... I finally got another picture of hide under your desk!

Um. False. What Midnight said.

Yeah, try to break free from the cliches. It's hard to at first, but you can't write poetry if you're going to just write what we've all heard a thousand ...

Cool concept. I like the symbolism too, it really made your message powerful. Good work!

Meh. Don't we all know it. This needs critical grammatical editing. It sounds like one of those samey r&b songs; make it poetic.

Pretty. I like the personal aspect of it, it really adds feeling to the poem. A little more impact would be good, but the simplicity is very effective. Nice work.

I think a little more impact wouldn't have gone astray, but I like the idea and the writing style. A little more interest and it's a good poem.

Good beginning, but it definitely lost the spark after the first few lines. Try to expand. Write it longer, and then condense it. I find that works well. You get ...