Liz

unlucky hours of september colour the sky a grazed silver, the sun lies vacantly. i wish it would rasp, collapse, leave us stinging, like the blurry red line on my ...

I like it, but I agree that the main character seems very arrogant, and that can get annoying to read about after a while. If he changes and fleshes-out a ...

The myth of Romulus and Remus was one of the most popular and important Roman myths in ancient times, and its significance to the founding of Rome has carried through ...

simple lists made on the back of complex black and white medical mixtures of letters just outline the date in bold, livid marker. the weak, spindly second hand of the ...

That's the skyline a little way from where I live. I live about half an hour away from Sydney Harbour...I'm sure you've all seen this picture a thousand times.

No, I swear it's hard to keep up with videos!

Great. There's the occassional grammatical error but the concept was really good and it was very well-written. I especially like the symbollism: city environment entwined with the idea of a ...

Short and sweet. Good work.

I like it, you conveyed the emotion really well. However, you need to be careful about the old cliches. Try to add a bit more originality, but overall it's pretty ...

Good concept, everyone can completely relate. Just expand on it, make it a little more interesting, because at the moment it's just a rambling pile of swear words. Which can ...

You've got the emotions, but it was smothered in cliches. Originality is the key.

Ah, wow. Great, original and simple to understand. I was everywhere you mentioned and feeling everything you felt. Good work.

Haha, I love both parts. I agree that the format is cool and really works for this style of poem. My only complaint was the few extra-long lines, it kind ...

indefatigable paroxysms of wind reel in the darkness, dragging coal rose bushes, ferns, branches with them as they whirl and wheel and spiral through the night. black branches bow, and ...

i love the way i'm ignored like light ignores certain places, inflicting shadows. the shadows in which i am drenched. i love the way i electrocute particular people with my ...