Liz

The media hasn't been telling anyone anything...they don't need to. Just showing her expressions and actions and everything, it makes it obvious to me that she's innocent. Have you seen ...

Is it just Australia, or are other countries hearing about Schappelle Corby, who was found guilty of smuggling 4kg of marijuana into Bali? She's been sentenced to 20 years and ...

Good concept, nicely-written. "My frostbit toes" Should it be "frost-bitten"? Anyway, great work, I really like this one.

Great. Good theme, easily to relate to, and well-written. Nice work.

Yep, I really like it. Original, well-written. Good work.

it's grey, peppery coughs hacking through the fleshy night. my hot, white light pierces my eyes and licks the pink wall. i crave pills but vitamin c tablets will do. ...

glittering pink flower earrings, auburn plaits heated by the sun, café mascara hanging off long lashes are not enough to satisfy the serpent in me. i need holes in my ...

snatches of bright cotton sliding off to the south, pinned onto chocolat bleu Parisien just aches with paix. it's more than the dull cocoa of the Eiffel Tower which is ...

Okay...but yeah, you might want to break some lines up. It was painful for me to read, the way it was set up. You also might want to check over ...

I really like this, the personal tone, everything. There are a few problems, some of which uniaeca pointed out. Also, I think you should re-think some parts like "but i’m ...

Pretty good. I have a problem with some lines, however, where you repeat half of the line above, e.g. He speaks, and his voice echoes Echoes throughout the void to ...

I lay awake, listening to the sallow shadows playing a vibrating melody on the walls, the ceiling, the carpet. Coldplay spins around and around in my head as it has ...

Beautiful. I can't say much more.

Yeah, some grammar revision wouldn't go astray but overall this was really good. The tone is great. Nice work.

Wow, great. So personal yet I can really relate. Amazing work.