Liz

Good work, I like it. Very well-written and a fair storyline. You probably could have developed the character a little more, whcih would have been easier with a longer piece ...

Australian! My dad's family' english, but he's lived here almost all his life. My mum's family has been here for ages...well, as far back as European arrival. Go really far ...

Last stanza is good, yep. You probably need to think about line breaks a bit more, try to end a line with a noun or something, makes it read better. ...

Oprah vs. Gwen Stefani. Lol.

Not too bad at all. I didn't really like the lines with the three words connected by full-stops, but apart from that, good work. You'd probably want a more solid ...

Yeah, we don't have grades at my school. But English is probably my best subject and I do well in the exams. I take Advanced English and Extension English (which ...

...poor doesn't rhyme with door... Pore Huh? How does it not? You must have a weird accent or something... :wink: Whore. You know you wanted to say it. :)

Just write. Writer's block is the worst thing, but just sitting down with a pen and paper will kill it soon enough. Just start with any random sentence, even if ...

Ew. Cheese. Don't ya love science class?

Clocks cry: stillness is a lie, my dear; The wheels revolve, the universe keeps running. (Proud you halt upon the spiral stair.) - "To Eva Descending the Stair", Sylvia Plath. ...

It becomes addictive. Once you're in the cycle you know how much it helps, short-term at least.

Just wait until you're ready, honestly, that's the best advice. It's different for each person, so I don't think there can be a milestone like a year or whatever. You ...

it bleeds dry sepia blood like cheap postcards which we devour like burning chocolat chaud à l'école. two chalk-white panadols are remaining in the cutting, green-splashed foil with round, plastic ...

clacking breaking glass dead workbooks old people playing boules saint denis with his head in his hands literally brown plastic cup of hot chocolat salami baguette giving the pickles to ...

The Australian convicted of smuggling marijuana into Bali and given 20 years in gaol. Innocent in my view...what about you?