Liz

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"Spicks and Specks" - The Bee Gees. "Wonderwall" - Oasis "Overdrive" - Katy Rose and more :)

so i stare at tigerskin again and feel the complete, woven silence that warms my bare shoulders with its fingertips, reborn from banging glitter and punching voices. it was air-conditioning ...

Yeah, welcome to YWS! Looking forward to seeing some of your work :).

plastic nostalgia, it's a world where it's only pink, blue or yellow - there's no black. glow-in-the-dark singlets and stripes on shoes. chunky clumps of happiness amidst every perfect colour ...

Well, if I understand the question correctly, I don't think anyone can be sure in the limited world we live in. But I think that our purpose is to be ...

Well I suppose the older the get the more you get into it. Atshioo? I thought it was Ashes... Nah, "atishoo" as in sneezing...it's very sadistic.

You know the "ring around the rosy" one? It was originally sung about the plague. "A-tishoo, a-tishoo, we all fall down?" Great. :)

I like it. Only problem for me was the "I tell you" in the last line. Either take it out or change it to something else. It just doesn't seem ...

"London Calling" - The Clash.

:) Yep, the word "exquisiteness" does exist. This wasn't bad. But I can't tell a lot from such a short snippet. I think you need to check over the grammar, ...

Not bad. I think you need to work on the imagery, metaphors, etc, because that's what makes a poem stand out in the end. You had something good in the ...

God. How could any qualified doctor make that mistake?

:? That's a worry.

rough throat sinus nose throbbing head. it's country Paris - caramel dirt, menthe grass, tiny crumbling cottages. it was awkward goodbyes amidst tired red eyes. le ciel est l'eau et ...