Liz

Not bad, but I've read too many of poems on this subject. If you want to be sucessful you need to think of an original way of putting your ideas ...

I agree. Wow. So many abstract thoughts that really make a lot of sense when you think about them. Really original too, great job!

Good, I like it. I thought that the "ah" might be a little out of place, but overall, good concept and very well-written.

Thanks for the comment. It's not specifically about dolls, but you're definitely getting the right idea. I wrote this after going to Disneyland Paris and it's just about the loss ...

:shock: Huh? How did I win? Strange... :D But great. Congrats everyone!

i was reading oscar wilde on the bus. i got off at the station amidst conventional stares of sunscreen, water bottles and ponytails. i didn't care. i opened oscar wilde ...

Wow. I liked it, but I agree with faith: words need space to breathe. If you cram too many complex words into one line and the reader has to read ...

Yeah, TYWC helped me a lot, with criticism and reading other people's work. I think reading other poets and getting to know their style helps a LOT. I'd say my ...

I have their other two albums...I'm just waiting until I have the money to buy X&Y. Believe me, it's hard. So hard.

I like it. At times it seemed a little awkward, but nothing that a few simple corrections wouldn't fix. In the first stanza, did you mean "giving way to gravity?" ...

Wow, where do I start? Old school: The Beatles, Queen, The Bee Gees, Nirvana, The Ramones, Red Hot Chilli Peppers, U2, Aerosmith, Oasis, The Clash, The Doors, Pink Floyd, Led ...

Wow, pretty amazing.

Great work. Yep, a few typos but that doesn't matter. I really enjoyed the original idea and your fresh way of writing. Keep it up.

Great. I love the atmosphere you created. The only things I had a problem with were the repetition of "Imprints" in the fourth and sixth stanzas, and the use of ...

Well. :D. Funny.