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Detective Arnold Baxter rolled up to the corner of Cherry St. and Oxford Blvd. in his 1996 Lincoln Continental. It was 6:30 PM on August 25, but the temperature in ...

I must say, I have become a fan of yours. Once again, this was beautiful. Oh, and that title. Gotta love the title. It drew me in. I honestly couldn't ...

UH-MAZE-ING! Wow. This was beautiful. The metaphors, the imagery, the stucture, the word choice. Flawless. I do agree though, that first paragraph was unnecessary. Damn. I forgot to let the ...

Why did I think of Earth day when I read this? I really didn't like it. I don't know why, I just think if you were to look hard enough, ...

Their teeth are lizards, slithering on crimson meat and slapping spiked tails into bone. Their cleft chins and minute ears pierce the French tan, the cultured cheeks. That has to ...

Very nice. I think the title fits very well with the piece, Also, your emotion and personification are very well done. My only problem is that your secod stanza sounds ...

I loved the 'Scrape a knee, break a bone' intro, but the repeating of 'that doesn't hurt' really irratated me. In my opinion, repetition works in some cases, but this ...

Yes! I love appreciation for cliche. It's something I think isn't given much of a chance anymore. I love the first two stanzas. Very nice word choice and structure. Also, ...

I came back! Okay, very nice bit! You tied it in really well with the story. I almost forgot that you added a whole scene to this. Well done. I ...

I think you should change the title. I feel it really doesn't do justice to this beautiful poem. Now I must admit, it is a little cliche, but being a ...

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Odd? Yes. Is it bad? No way!! This was very intriguing. I guess that's the right word. What I really liked was the stucture and word choice. Also, your intro ...

The rhythm's a little off, but I thought this was the cutest poem! I love your word choice. Your parents will just watch in awe, As I prove you are ...

I really liked the rhythm and word choice. But I think you should have added more. It feels... incomplete. I'm not one to give long reviews, so I'll leave off ...

I know there's a movie called Waiting to Exhale, though I've never seen it, and the title captured my interest. So I wrote something. And gave it that title. Just ...