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Hey Serenity! Long time no see. First, I must say, this poem has a lot of promise. You've got the emotion... you just don't have the right words. Eimear was ...

Hey Newbie! Now, we all gotta remind you, since it appears no one has said it yet, I will. Here at YWS, we have a 2:1 ratio. Meaning for every ...

Uhh... the only time I watched it was because there was nothing else on. It was this marathon and I think it was really old. I prefer to watch America's ...

Oooh... gotta love this topic. Growing up in a Christian family, at first, my mother detested Harry Potter. We were at Wal Mart one day shopping for underwear for my ...

ooh! fun! Banned for being a Speaker of the Forum

Well, I don't know know if I got the same message you were trying to convey, but I thought that was a poem about peer pressure and how it lead ...

Thank you! I edited this story following what Sapphire and clograbby told me. I'm entering my first contest and this is the piece (thanks XxxDo!). P.S I've decided to write ...

Sorry it took me so long to get here. I can't wait to read this! Prologue: -Withering Castle- Breathing softly I did my best to resist the temptation to sneeze. ...

I love writing short stories. And I love to hear what people have to say about them. But there's one common problem I have... I always switch tenses. Whenever I ...

“Sorry Mr. Richards,” Anna shuts the door; relieved the glass hadn’t broken, she slowly picks up her pile of undeveloped pictures. Rewrite: "Sorry Mr. Richards," Anna shuts the door, relieved ...

VERY POWERFUL! :shock: That was beautiful, my friend. Your voice is amazing... I can hear your growl! My opinions are in bold: I'm not sorry I can't stand by and ...

This just oozes sarcasm! I love it. To tell you the truth, at first, I didn't like the title. I thought it was too blunt. But now that I've read ...

The only advice I could give is: This isn't much of a poem. I like the idea, stick with it, but I don't think you could call this grouping of ...

A/N: This is based on a true story. And although it isn't inspiration as to why I started writing, it's inspiration for this particular story. I had fun writing this ...

As she struts towards the car, she looks Anna dead in the eyes. Ghosts strut? :? Like FallingIntoTheSky said, this is very well written. You're a great writer, xhalcyonx128! Ihad ...