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That was good! You do have some puncuation issues, but nothing that can't be fixed over a another read. Beautiful. It felt like a child was seeing the monster come ...

Hey Took! Glad to see another new member. Syte already reminded you of the rules, so I don't have to... but just remember that! That way everything here runs smoothly. ...

banned for having Mello as your avatar... Near's better!

Hey Gahks! I've always seen you around, yet I've never gotten the chance to review anything from you. I guess today is my lucky day! I really can't give anything ...

Banned for telling me 'oh, please'... how so very rude!

me!

This was posted in 2007 and there are no reviews? Well, that's a shame. I'll review for you! I used to be apart of the world of the living, but ...

Alrighty, I'll take a crack at this... OK, so i came up with this, like in two seconds. it probably reads that way, so be as harsh as you can ...

Awww... How cute! I love stories where they mix lyrics into the story line. Andres Segura... you couldn't have picked a more perfect name. The only thing I have to ...

my stomach starts growling, in the late afternoon my mother simply says,"supper will be ready soon" but my haunger just can't wait so I go to the place where we ...

Hey Lulu (if I may call you that)! First, I wanna say welcome! I see you are a Novice. I hope you're following the 2:1 ratio. You know, the ratio ...

Very nice. I like it alot. I agree with Sam when she suggests that you mix up the intro a little. I do like that first sentence, though. But maybe ...

Hello Kitty