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Re: Way Back Home
Woah! Deep. Very deep. Very intense. The ending was wonderful and powerful. Although I don't like the repeating phrase "When I look upon your face...". But that's just me. Bravo! ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Poem
Poem The Poets hand quivers- With thoughts on edge of pen The world upon their shoulders- And races to begin. Beautiful intro. I know the feeling! They fling words onto ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Like You
:edit: You just can't grasp the concept, I am what I am, No gimmicks, No labels And no one understands, The way I was then, Isn't the same as now ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
banned for banning me for something another person banned me for already
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Tenses make me tense
Thanks a bunch you three. I guess I have to be real careful of that from now on.
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: CurlyQPride
Really cute. It has a lot of voice and I like the structure! Sorry that wasn't very constructive! :D Keep writing, and keep up the curlyqpride!
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
banned for having an hilarious avvie! I love that movie...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Max Killer
I have to agree with OnCeUpOnAtIm3Xo... your story is too fast paced and you do need more character development. But I did find this quite humorous. Especially when he peed ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: What makes a man evil?
Hey kris. Comments in bold! Are all evils inherent, as something waiting innate? Or be wickedness a skill, As something learnt by free will? I like the first question, but ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
banned for being rascalover
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
banned for forgetting!
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
banned for not letting me stab you in the eye...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
banned for being confused in the first place
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Has anybody an all time favourite poem?
I love love love 'Still I Rise' by Maya Angelou. It's very powerful.
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: This word reminds me of... [2]
social
Jul 22, 2008
