Livinginfantasy

banned for acknowledging his existential-ness

Beep, Regret swamps every thought, Should have told him, Should have been there, Should have stopped it. Beep, Too late for apology, All attempts fall on empty ears, Or dry ...

I loved this. I was in the crowd of "a penny?" but, having finished it, I am in awe. Very, very nice. My only critique is not actually of the ...

If I call will you arrive? If I yell your name will you yell back? Horrible first four lines! I suggest scratching those and starting all over. If the world ...

I no what you think Its gonna be another boring poem About how somebody has unspoken able beauty Or just to short of a skirt But this is about your ...

Me likey! Me likey alot! A few suggestions though, which can be found in red: Look at the lines on your hands You'll see a story there, The insignia engraved ...

The cut up lines are meant to mimic a heart beat. It's four in the morning and I'm waking for my daily dose of failure pills and guilt medicine. Dizzy, ...

I like this. You have great word choice... but there are certain places where this can be improved, in my opinion. Comments and suggestions in red! She wondered the lonely ...

Thanks! I'll fix it up later

banned for this little spat you two seem to be having

banned for not being a guy...

ok, so, this poem was created by me when I was a couple years younger, and I honestly think that it is completely cheesy and genious all at the same ...

This is great! I started taking notes and I realized it would be better to just do this: I always had the feeling that I was cursed. Bad things just ...

Basically, you are contradicting the way he thinks, and only an author can do it. I know you want me to fix the grammatical errors but you cannot change the ...

How interesting... I love this chick! I don't know why, she's just awesome. Is she some type of angel or something? Anywho, I like this alot. Is there more? I ...