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Re: Reflection
Meet my horse, Dusty.
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Empty Sky (Edits)
I'll keep this short, seeing as I don't have much to say. This is nice and philosophical and all that, but, as you said, others have said that it didn't ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Bullets (1)
Holy crapola. The diner smells of death and brew. That is one fantastic first sentence. And now I will read on. ^^ I'm sitting here, feet propped up on the ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Puddles
Clearing up things that may have been misconstrued: I wonder why they didn't call the police, but considering stupid decisions advance the story I won't harp on it. I think ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Puddles
Jimmy stepped into the truck with a case of beer in his hand. Not that it was difficult - there wasn't a consciousness to the decision, nothing to worry him. ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Contractions
That'd'n't've = that would not have It't'n't've = it can't not have I can only imagine writing these while taking notes quickly. xD If I had read these in a ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Feeling Fine - Feeling Feline
You're so lucky you got your cat to sit still. I tried that on my cats, and they squirmed and ran away from me every two seconds. They hated it. ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: A Cold Grey Memory, Prologue
Hi there! I suppose it's because I don't know what's coming next, but why do you even have a prologue? This information, for me, seems as if it could be ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: My other half part 1
Oh dear heavens. That first paragraph jumped out at me. And I don't mean the "BOO, did I scare you?!" kind of thing. I mean that a hoard of monsters ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Broken: Chapter 1: A friend, an ally, a lover?
Hi. :D This is actually quite nice. The beginning was a bit slow, but near the end it became really sweet. There were a few nit-picky things that bothered me, ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: KATANA: Prolouge
Hi there! Shawn was worried. Why? He had a date. Sure he'd had dates before, but this was the one date that would seal the deal. He and his girlfriend, ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Feed
I haven't read this book, and frankly I don't even know what it's about. (Though I suppose we can assume from your fantastic little piece of insight, eh?) This is ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance
Hiya! Please please please tell me that your misspelling of "vengeance" was on purpose. Anyways, to the review! I love how you jumped straight into the action, wonderful job. However, ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: The Demon Within (Part 1)
Hi there! Okay, so I read a bit into this and had to immediately pause. I had a "What the heck just happened?!" moment, and I really hate those. Here's ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Review Day Check-In Thread
Ooh, this sounds like fun. :D
May 29, 2011
