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  • Art & Photography Re: Reflection

    Meet my horse, Dusty.

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Empty Sky (Edits)

    I'll keep this short, seeing as I don't have much to say. This is nice and philosophical and all that, but, as you said, others have said that it didn't ...

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Bullets (1)

    Holy crapola. The diner smells of death and brew. That is one fantastic first sentence. And now I will read on. ^^ I'm sitting here, feet propped up on the ...

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Puddles

    Clearing up things that may have been misconstrued: I wonder why they didn't call the police, but considering stupid decisions advance the story I won't harp on it. I think ...

    Jun 7, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Puddles

    Jimmy stepped into the truck with a case of beer in his hand. Not that it was difficult - there wasn't a consciousness to the decision, nothing to worry him. ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Grammar & Research Re: Contractions

    That'd'n't've = that would not have It't'n't've = it can't not have I can only imagine writing these while taking notes quickly. xD If I had read these in a ...

    Jun 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Feeling Fine - Feeling Feline

    You're so lucky you got your cat to sit still. I tried that on my cats, and they squirmed and ran away from me every two seconds. They hated it. ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: A Cold Grey Memory, Prologue

    Hi there! I suppose it's because I don't know what's coming next, but why do you even have a prologue? This information, for me, seems as if it could be ...

    May 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My other half part 1

    Oh dear heavens. That first paragraph jumped out at me. And I don't mean the "BOO, did I scare you?!" kind of thing. I mean that a hoard of monsters ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Broken: Chapter 1: A friend, an ally, a lover?

    Hi. :D This is actually quite nice. The beginning was a bit slow, but near the end it became really sweet. There were a few nit-picky things that bothered me, ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: KATANA: Prolouge

    Hi there! Shawn was worried. Why? He had a date. Sure he'd had dates before, but this was the one date that would seal the deal. He and his girlfriend, ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Feed

    I haven't read this book, and frankly I don't even know what it's about. (Though I suppose we can assume from your fantastic little piece of insight, eh?) This is ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Vengeance

    Hiya! Please please please tell me that your misspelling of "vengeance" was on purpose. Anyways, to the review! I love how you jumped straight into the action, wonderful job. However, ...

    May 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Demon Within (Part 1)

    Hi there! Okay, so I read a bit into this and had to immediately pause. I had a "What the heck just happened?!" moment, and I really hate those. Here's ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day Check-In Thread

    Ooh, this sounds like fun. :D

    May 29, 2011


The capacity of human beings to bore one another seems to be vastly greater than that of any other animal.
— H. L. Mencken