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Re: halloween nightmare
There were a lot of things wrong with this story. Punctuation wasn't used correctly, the structure was very off, the plot line was messy, and there were a lot of ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: My true friend(WARNING: you may cry.......)
Fact: Chuck Norris didn't cry when he read this poem. kthanx.
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Can you hear me?
I'm sick of being anonymous, cloaking myself with the shadows of others. I want to feel the brilliant sunlight. Can you hear me now? I hated being referred to as ...
Nov 3, 2009 -
Re: Falling into the Darkness
(I'd posted this very similar story "Falling into the Darkness" but it didn't have a background, you didn't know who it was, or anything! So I cleaned it up, and ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Fire Angel
I was confused with this piece, it was hard for me to follow along with. All and all, it's a wonderful poem! But when it said "wings" is where you ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: My first attempt at photography
The second one is my favorite, it's uquine, and it has a statement; a lot of different statments at that too! I'm not exactly who said it, but whoever said ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Photography by me
Hello! I'm intrested in photography myself and let me just say; I totally envy your camera! The first and second picture are my favorites, the ice crystles and the tree ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Falling into the Darkness
The way this story begins is far from a “once upon a time.” and it doesn’t end with a “happily ever after,” because in a couple of peoples life, those ...
Oct 14, 2009
