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If I had to describe someone I liked, it’s pretty hard to. Not just personality, not just looks, but who they simply are. Sure, you can describe exactly how their ...

I wrote this down because it's just how I feel. No one in particular, there isn't much meaning to this piece, but I wanted to know if it was any ...

Glad you decided to join YWS Lee! I'm the sister. :} Give my brother some lovin', eh?

You, my friend, just made my day. I've read all of the Twilight series, and each one makes me have several gigglefits. It's just so... vampire cheesy. I loved your ...

*WRITERS NOTIE: Yes, I know 2+2=4.* For me, a typical "day at the office" is being couped up in my small room. Typing away at my... what is it? Four, ...

I really like this! It's a bit confusing at first though, I had to read it twice and the second time more slowly. I like that you're not quite sure ...

Hey, WriterChick, I'm Ellie and I'm going to review your story! Overall, it was pretty exciting, and really made me want to read more. If you shortened it up a ...

This is some of my photography work! It's my favorite pictures! Tell me what you think, please! :elephant:

I couldn't get the name out of my head for this story, or the story, so I want to know if I should finish it! Thanks! Ellie: Josh? Oh… there’s ...

Hi KailiaMarie! I'm Ellie, and I love your pictures! I have a few suggestions. The first one is my favorite, it's clear, the sun is bright, it looks like a ...

Beautiful. It's one of those things that's like, "Man, why didn't I write that?" You have a gift, and it seems natural. I love how you described everything so differently ...

( Note: this is based on a true... relationship-ish thing between me and a guy I like. It was a journal entry I wrote and I liked the way it ...

Maybe if I don't look at it, it will go away. Wash away with all my other worries that I've thought about today. Fade into the background, walk into the ...

This is a really nice piece! I like how you wrote it in second person, that's usually a very tricky writing style, but you aced it. It was interesting and ...

Terrific! I would change just two things, at the beginning you have "Ok here is my poem" in bold. I would edit it and make it to where you have ...