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I loved it. I loved the title, I loved the overall themes of it, I just loved the whole honesty of it all. Great job. It's different and not one ...

Thank you so much everybody who reviewed this. It really means a lot to me to hear your opinions. I'll try working on the errors and everything and I really ...

Let Me Die The whole world's laughing, Yet I don't understand the joke. Will somebody please clue me in, 'Cause it's agonizing to be this miserable. Everybody sees in technicolor, ...

Ha. I don't think religious people are going to be too enthusiastic with your theme. But anyways, poetry-wise, I thought it was pretty interesting. I agree with angels-symphony on all ...

The best thing about your poems is that a lot of people can relate to it. I know a lot of high-functioning autistic children who have IQ's of above 190 ...

Hey Deemah. Nice to meet you. I remember I once stopped writing too because everybody who didn't matter, including my teachers, were putting me down and at that time, 11 ...

Hey there. Yeah, you were right, it really would've been a waste to post the two chapters separately. Great story, by the way. In Chapter 30, I didn't get this ...

I really enjoyed this piece of poetry. I think a lot of people could relate to it. I liked the non-rhyming scheme of it all. I've tried and searched all ...

I loved it, even though I've converted to agnosticism. It was an emotional raw poem and that's probably why it was so good. I didn't find anything wrong with it, ...

Woah. I LOVEEDDDD the analogy. Waiting being taken out to play That part doesn't really make sense. Shouldn't it be "Waiting to be taken out to play"? Anyways, great poetry.

Wow! FINALLY!!!!!! I've been waiting so long for this novel to continue. I thought this was absolutely perfect, especially the way the plot's going. Great job. Thanks for posting this.

i LOVED it. I really liked the rhyming scheme and it definitely enhanced the quality of it. It had a story to tell and many could relate to it. Good ...

Hey there! “Hey Kenzie!” I greeted my best friend excitedly. This doesn't catch attention. You need a better hook “Hey!” she replied. “So what did you get on number 10?” ...

Nope. Not weird at all. I find that most writers are very private and secluded about their personal life or things that mean a lot to them. Maybe it's derived ...

Wow, KJ. I really wish I could write like that. It was great and your writing is so good it deserves to get published. There was this one part I ...