LittlePrincess

I'm linking you to my novel, I only have two chapters up, although I may put a third up later. I would really appreciate a review for chapter 2 but ...

Well, it's been two years since I came up with my Falling Sun (although not since I posted it. I probably won't actually write an entire sequel but I came ...

Thank you! I'll do the 1988 thing because its more of a romance than action. I'll just change the texting part to like... talking in person. Because I think talking ...

So I am writing a novel/novella/story and I have come across a dilemma. There are two story lines, one that is the present and one that is flashbacks. When I ...

This was cute. Maybe cute isn't the best adjective but it's the first one that came to mind. I don't really have any critiques, I just liked it. Keep up ...

Hello! Here for a review! I think it was the rush of uncertainty about whether or not anyone would actually look for her that made her do it. So this ...

So I accidentally put chapter one in short stories.. (if anyone knows how to move it that would be great) Here's chapter two anyway. The time is sort of confusing ...

I always put my first chapter into short stories... does anyone know how I can move it? or If i can at all

I love this, I really did. A lot of times rhyming poems sound sing-songy or forced but I thought this was perfect. My only real critique is that the shower ...

Welcome, Welcome! YWS is great I know you'll enjoy it. I know this has been asked but what sort of stories/poems do you like to write? Have you written anything ...

In my English class we are having a debate over The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain. Specifically, one group argues that the book should be banned and the ...

I would love a review to my first chapter: Also, I'm willing to give one in return so if you have anything you'd like me to look at just post ...

I'm learning about the 1930s in school now! Ok review... Living the life I live now, looking back on my life five years ago seems like a blur. Your first ...

Hi Pheonix! Littleprincess here for a review; and the junior high girls' table, a thin, pale, dark haired girl from my grade leaned against the wall. She doesn’t go to ...

Review would be greatly appreciated: And I'd be happy to do one in return :) Just let me know by PM or on my wall or just attach it to ...