LittlePrincess

This was beautifully original and creative. I loved it. I think you could really expand on this story and perhaps talk about the life of the girl incapable of love, ...

I'm backk from France and school is over so letss gooo. :)

Hi I am here as requested! I'm not too good at critiquing poetry as I said but I can tell you what I think. I like the repetition of autumn ...

I added part 1 to my reading list a while ago and only just got around to it but I'm really glad I did. Your story could definitely be a ...

To be completely honest with you, reading this was really hard for me. Not because it's bad, because it isn't bad, but because it's too true . When I was ...

Why yes, I did finish this novel months ago. Yet, here I am posting a random chapter in the middle of it. Enjoy! Later that day, Kevin was showering so ...

I agree with everything you said. Being an atheist is not about hating religion and people of faith. Yet, on the other hand there are those people who think they ...

You say "I know it's not very good" which is obviously just you being modest because it was great. I like your writing style and you already have an intriguing ...

I need a job for my character but I can't think of what it could be. She's 39 years old and has a teenage daughter who she had when she ...

Although the title gives a proper description of the story, it's not my favorite and you should give it one that is original to your story, not just what it ...

I read the synopsis of the novel and I got hooked. I see you have a lot of reviews for this chapter but I hope to be of some help ...

Wow you are a really good writer and I'm already hooked. This story is so original already. I don't really have any nitpicks although it's all dialogue which I'm usually ...

If you are not to busy I would love a review for chapter 4 of my novel It most likely will not make sense out of context so you might ...

Hello everyone! I made a review thread a while back but only got one taker so I'm trying again. I can review most short stories and novels . My only ...

*opens menu* I would like a novel review please :) It's General Fiction although I wonder if it would do better in Romance. Either way here you go I would ...