LittlePrincess

I'm back yet again! I'm finding myself very invested in your story... I don't really have that many nitpicks except one: I made a mental note on the brilliance Hermione ...

Back again! he’s just that awesome That made me laugh. Does Gia's view on the games reflect the view of everyone else at Hogwarts? Try and show that, like that ...

Hello! Little Princess here for a review! So the first line is a little heavy, therefore, it doesn't really draw the reader in and it causes the reader to get ...

Hello! Little Princess, here for a review. I love the vagueness of the opening paragraph. There is enough description to give the reader a proper sense of what is going ...

Hi! I reviewed the beginning chapters of this earlier and I'm back for more (even if it's been months...). As always, i'm a huge Harry Potter fan and I love ...

Hello Sarah Jane, Little Princess here for a review. I just read the first chapter and I thought it was great! The plot is creative and the storyline is executed ...

**Edit: I made some changes on this so if you want to see the most recent version it is here: This is my unfinished short story. I'm going to finish ...

This is my entry for Jaetwee's contest The Beginning of the End The story had to be 250 words and start and end with the same word. I tried :3 ...

I liked it a lot, especially your initial prose. The story was creative, funny and simple (in a good way). However, I would like to know what it is that ...

I saw it yesterday and I absolutely loved it. I am really sad that it is the last movie but I was a lot more sad when I finished the ...

It was Abbey’s 5th birthday and her mom gave her a quarter to spend at the local bakery. The bakery was just around the corner from their house and was ...

Sounds like a great story to me. Also pretty challenging but if you are up for it by all means go right ahead!

Hello Desire and welcome to our site! I'll gladly look at what you posted. I hope you like it here!

If you're anything like me, you've planned novels, started them, then realized you didn't feel like writing it. You feel that you know the story, so what's the point. That ...

“You still have quite some time,” the doctor said, pulling the blue rubber glove off of his hand and throwing it in the trash. Brandon sighed and collapsed into his ...