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Re: Hi there!
Hello ChalkyUKnome and welcome to the site! YWS is definitely a great place to sort out all those ideas in your head, it's nice to get a second opinion on ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Saving a Child (Chapter 1)
Hi Miss Mystery, or Sol... I'd be glad to give you a review. My excitement for volunteering with kids was enough for me to forget about the horrible weather the ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter Nine)
Like I said... back for more! I'm totally in love with this story. It still baffled me, I have never even seen her talk to Cedric, so what could she ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter Eight)
As always, I'm here to review but this time in honor of review day :) I look forward to reading more of your story. “I’m doing the best I can, ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: ICONOCLASTIC 18
Hello! Here for a review. Happy Review Day! Firstly, Down the coast of California, where Santa Catalina looms in the distance as an apparition of escape that is inescapable , ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: From Sestina to Sestina
Hello there! Here for review number two :) I absolutely love Sestina's, I am not even a fan of poetry but I think Sestina's are great and they take real ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Phone Rings Again...
Hello! This is my first review on Review Day; I liked this piece. At first I was a little confused about the point, and it seemed a little monotonous but ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone pt.2
Rated 16+ because of F word. Part 1 can be found here: I sit cross-legged, my back up against the gravestone, my head tilted back so that I can see ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Castaways [full]
This sounds really fun! I'd like to reserve a girl. I don't have time to finish this profile yet but I will ASAP! (Sorry, I completely forgot but I'm still ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone pt.1
One thing that doesn’t scare me are graveyards at night. I sometimes wonder if what scares people is the prospect of someone rising from the grave. That is a possibility ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone pt.1
One thing that doesn’t scare me are graveyards at night. I sometimes wonder if what scares people is the prospect of someone rising from the grave. That is a possibility ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone *edited
One thing that doesn’t scare me are graveyards at night. I sometimes wonder if what scares people is the prospect of someone rising from the grave. That is a possibility ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The 56th Hunger Games DT
I agree, or we could each do a little blurb about being chosen or something. Just an idea ^^ Also, can I have 2 characters (like both tributes from district ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The 56th Hunger Games [accepting; 12]
District 8 Girl, please! Name: Coretta (Cori) Tracey Age: 16 District: 8 Appearance: Large brown eyes, strawberry-blonde, waist length, stick straight hair. Tall and thin in a gangly sort of ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: The Soul Reason of Living-Chapter 1
Hello! Little Princess here for a review; Obviously something catastrophic had happened. This statement seems a little nonchalant. Gloria should be alarmed at her mothers tears but the word obviously ...
Aug 17, 2011
