LittlePrincess

So this is Chapter two. A little summary: The main character, Sophie is going to her boyfriend, Kevin's beach house. Along with them is his best friend, Tristan, his brother, ...

Hi Rygel. I'm new too! I'm still working out the site and I've only posted the first chapter to my story. I can review for you if you want :)

I'm reviewing :D First of all, many spelling mistakes, you might want to read it over before posting it (that will give people less obvious things to tell you about ...

Very nice attention grabber ^_^ That stinks for elephants. What was Oprah about? I'll happily review. How about a review for a review, eh? :)

I'd like a partner! Except I'm not 100% sure on how this works but I would love to try

I like the beginning, it's a very creative idea and also it draws the reader in. Maybe set the scene a little bit, like all the boys crowded around the ...

First of all, "whisper-yelled" doesn't really sound good or make much sense. Maybe say she whispered (because I assume thats what she is doing) but she strained her voice urgently. ...

I stepped outside into the cool morning air. The summer sun peeked over the top of the house across the street; light spreading like liquid throughout the pink, cotton candy ...

I have to say that I absolutely love this poem. The title is griping in that it's so vague yet interesting because it doesn't really make sense (I hope that ...

I agree with Nova in saying that I hardly see this as a poem. I like the idea and I think it could be made into something good. Also you ...