LittlePrincess

"Julie, sometimes" She didn't finish her sentence. So I assume Nana is saying that, but it is unclear how she is saying that. Is she concerned? But it was cut ...

After lunch, we followed the rocky path down to the beach. There was a drop so from the sand you could only see the very top of the house. The ...

I'm not usually a poet but I was inspired. This is based on a very close friend of mine and it is the product of late night insomnia, I'd love ...

Charisma is a cool name ^_^ Pay attention to tense. You say Dylan was struggling to pass tenth grade and he is disorganized. And then you say drives Charisma insane. ...

Wow I really really really like this! Your rhymes are very clever and your flow is good. I'm very sorry that this is how you feel about Father's day, but ...

I think that sounds pretty interesting. What would they do there?

I really like this! Especially because it is just plain truth, rather than built up, fancy language, you know? I also like it because I experienced the same thing on ...

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1. Where would you travel to? The 50s and just hang out there 2. Would you time travel for vacation? Maybe, but probably not 3. Would you ever consider moving, ...

First of all, great way to start it. It intrigued me, a lot. he felt the gold ring and then he sighed Hm, why did he sigh? It seems kind ...

I see you already have an answer, but I think this is a very cool idea. I would be really interested in reading something like this, good luck to you!

I liked the idea a lot, especially the last line because it is so unexpected As far as flow I would suggest taking out the "at me" from the first ...

Thank you both and I'm glad you enjoyed it. And Dawn, I actually looked up name meanings when naming my characters although Sophie is to be more ironic. It makes ...

oh i'm glad you liked it :) I agree it is cliche and I would rather stray away from that but it's too late. I'll hopefully get the next part ...

Those who had stayed were the ones as empty inside as the bar was to leave until told or were waiting on the chance of someone walking in and thereby ...