LittlePrincess

"Well I think today is a perfect day to go, don't you?" Mr. Mahoney consulted his wife the next morning over a delicious breakfast of bacon and eggs. "Yeah!" Ethan ...

That night Anna and I were brushing our teeth in the bathroom. "Is this the best vacation ever, or what?" She gushed, unscrewing the cap of her toothpaste. "Yeah," I ...

Hi, I just wanted to say that this was really good! I'm not usually into fantasy but I loved your creativness. I also really liked how the different kings thing ...

Hi there, I have a romance novel called My Falling Sun, I would really appreciate a review. Here's the link to my novel:

The waves crashed loudly and icy water swirled around my feet, splashing up my ankles and sending shivers up my legs. Ethan climbed out of a wave, sopping, with water ...

Willa Johnson Run and hide, or curl up into a ball praying that it goes away What would your character do if he or she was given the role of ...

I like poetry and I would love to practice writing it or even just write some for fun but I can never get inspiration for poems. I need something to ...

Wow this is such an interesting idea, I really enjoyed it and it was kind of creepy, in a good way. As for the comment above, I think the spelling ...

The ending was absolutely shocking and intriguing! I really want to read more already. However, the beginning was too vague for my taste. I don't know where you plan to ...

Hey there :) I think the first sentence could be worded a little better to hook the reader, you know? Maybe start with some imagery, describing the thunder and lightning ...

Eventually, Ethan, Anna and Kevin returned, all sopping wet. I looked up at Kevin but he avoided eye contact with me. Tristan gave me a comforting smile. We decided to ...

Name: Willa Johnson Age: 16 Gender: Female For/Against/Witch: Witch Appearance (Please no anime): Small and pale, strawberry blonde hair, bright green eyes. (Sorry I don't have a picture) Age when ...

Hey, I read you're last Pepper post and I really liked it. And also I have the same problem as you, I can never motivate myself to actually finish a ...

Hey, if you don't mind I'd love if you could review my short story My Falling Sun I only have two chapters up (in three parts) so here is what ...

Wonderful description in the first paragraph... I'm not really sure if Julie has a reason to be so sour towards Nana since she is clearly just helping. Even if she ...