LittlePrincess

Tears

Hi Ultra! I have a romantic novel: and I would greatly appreciate a review :) It has a lot of chapters so I don't mind if you don't do all ...

Hi Rock! If you ever have time I'd really appreciate a review for my novel: There's a lot of chapters so I won't be offended if you don't wanna do ...

This was great! I don't have much to say as far as edits but I just wanted to pop in and say that I loved this. Keep writing please!

Hello there! One thing He push me up against the wall, and pressed his lips to mine *pushed This is clearly the beginning to a larger story and does a ...

I live on the east coast and the heat has been brutal, I sympathize completely. I really liked this as a little short story. Tucker was a control freak That ...

Hi, I decided to check to see if you had anything new and you did! So I am here for a review :) Lets get started... H.o.m.e. W.o.r.k.... Why is ...

Hi, I am a huge Harry Potter fan so I am very excited to read your story. Let's get started... I think you need more of an engaging beginning. Describe ...

First of all, I absolutely love the opening, you do a great job at setting the scene. However, the beginning drags on a little bit before getting to "the good ...

It was raining, big, fat, heavy rain drops catapulting like bullets at the dark window. I wished they would stop. We were watching a movie, a dumb comedy that I ...

Why Hello :) Same Asian eyes. Same chin that I got from my dad. And some Mexican that I also got from my dad. I always knew I wasn’t fully ...

I couldn’t sleep. I was thinking about Tristan too much which only made me worry about Kevin and worry that I wasn’t thinking about Kevin. But I didn’t want to ...

I'm very glad to review for you ^_^ I was eating a big chocolate ice cream, feeling Since you only have two items her you may want to say "and ...

I like it ending there, too, but I don't know how it can. I added more to the end in tell me if you think that's better or worse.

Author's Note: This starts off right where the last part ended because I wasn't sure how to end it. Those of you who read the last part (if any of ...