LittlePrincess

I'm American. Here in New England we say "Wicked" for like awesome and cool. "That's sick!" Also means awesome. "Crap" or "Holy Crap" when you stub your toe. "Oh my ...

Hi there! Here for a review :) First thing is that I am not a big fan of the one paragraph thing. I suppose it is a matter of opinion ...

Hi, first of all I just want to say that a lot of times when I can't sleep I will grab my itouch and write stuff. 3 am is when ...

Here for a review as promised :) My childhood dolls and stuffed animals sat impressively over my shelves. I never liked getting rid of things so I kept them in ...

Hey, so good job cleaning it up! There's still a few nitpicks but I'm here to review your plot.. it's very good! You introduce Pat's character very well and some ...

Hello :) Just one note, you don't need to write "Please read and review/offer advice" because that is what is expected when you post your story ^_^ Now, grammar. " ...

Hi there. So I can see your point here, it's that High School sucks (obviously) but it seems that you stray away from this point, especially with the skipping part ...

Hi Issac, I'm somewhat new to this site, at least I still feel new. Welcome! I love Tennis! What kind of books do you read, what kind of stuff do ...

I like the Renesmee/Jake piece, good job. Except it seems a little familier, the honeymoon being cut short. I think you should go original and not have it be exactly ...

Some of you may have read my poem with the same title. This is basically the story version of that poem but extended (because its a novel) She stared, long ...

I haven't read chapter one but I'm here for a review anyway Erik Carter is the hottest guy Was instead of is for tense consistancy. So it's pretty cliche, the ...

Bad title? Probably. There's a contest for only using dialogue in a piece and I thought I'd try it out. Tear it apart! Questions, comments, concerns? Likes? Dislikes? Thank you! ...

Hello there! Here for a review! Him and his four brothers were trained to fix cars I'm pretty sure it should be "He and his four brothers" Secretly he wished ...

First of all, this made me laugh! I loved the humor and the casualness. Hey I'm a zombie Shows said casualness and humor. Nitpick: but one day one fateful day ...

Thank you so much! (Feel free to pick and choose any chapters you feel like doing)