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LittlePrincess

  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello

    The storybook rpgs are tons of fun and is definitely a great place to look. I like them because I often get bored with my own stories and its a ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: An Eight-Year-Old's Philosophy

    Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! but Kamil had told her to be silent with that adult sense of urgency that she didn’t quite understand. That's a good ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: The Gentleman

    Hello! Little Princess, here for a review! I looked out of the window, the dark street outside was lighten only by a struggling lamp. Opening sentence is a little bland, ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello

    Welcome to YWS! We are glad to have you. You've come on a great day to start reading works, and seeing examples of reviews. What sort of things do you ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: A Not So Pleasant View

    As a huge scary movie fan I am very excited to read this. So, here I go! "Would you like a cup of tea, Darling?" I asked my husband, Introduce ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Don't have one yet

    I tried to run despite the pain in my legs; I just wanted to get away. However, the more I ran the closer the footsteps got. There came a point ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Rum-Runners

    Hello! Little Princess here for a review! The beginning is great, I like how it jumps right into the action and I absolutely love the characterization of Danny. Already I'm ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Without conditions

    Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! «About me,» I said, listening to the words as they made their way out of my mouth, making the optimism they were ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: OS-DBT: Prologue

    Hello! Little Princess here for a review; It was a hazy Tuesday afternoon in the middle of summer. A cool wind blew in off the water, carrying a tangy scent ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Bronze Challenges (chapter one)

    Hello! You will probably be my last review for the night so I am here to give it my all! Kara's lips felt smooth and clean to the touch, which ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Drivers Never Sleep (possible title)

    The title intrigued me... I mean, what could that possibly mean?? So, here I am to review your work and satisfy my curiosity; or a seventeen year old, she was ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: What I can't see

    Hello there, Little Princess here for a review! I am a huge scary movie fan so I'm already excited to read this. Here I go! John walked through the moon-lighted ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    Yes review days are dedicated to reviewing although you should still review on every other day :) I like writing romance, too so I'd be happy to look at what ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    Hello Kehau and welcome to YWS! It's a great website for every aspiring writer (which I assume you are because you have joined :wink: ) You happened to come on ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Shattered Rainbows

    Wow, you caught me instantly. The opening line, the first paragraph and the title were all done brilliantly! I've been awake for a month now I like how you are ...

    Aug 28, 2011


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