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Re: The Trail of Tears.
I just started the Trail of Tears in school so that's pretty cool, on to the review however.. "Wake up, Elaine, dear." She sat on the bed by my feet. ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Will review almost anything!
Hi I just have a little poem I wrote. I'm trying my hand out at poetry, tell me what you think!
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: The Runaways (Accepting Characters)
NAME: Harper Puckett GENDER: Female AGE: 16 APPEARANCE:She's short and skinny, with thin, dirty blonde hair. Her eyes are technically blue but appear more grey. She's also really pale, doesn't ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: He's seen too much
First, caps in the title. (OCD ;) ) I don't think you have too little description. Too much can make the story boring and make the reader lose interest. Tense ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: A Falling Sun
I'm not very good a critiquing poetry but I was intrigued by the title because I have written a novel called My Falling Sun. And maybe it's just me but ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Those Sexy Lemons....
Wow that was fantastic, very amusing. Wanda Waffle and Tammy Toast? Loved it!Your puns were great, "and so he left me there with my heart cut into nice easy bites.", ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Hands
Spread like a star, his hands are big Thick and strong, a cord of muscle ripples from his elbow to his thumb, as it lies clumsily. Iron fingers and rigid, ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Working on Reviewer II, please help me....
Hi, I know you said short stories but I have a romantic novel and I would greatly appreciate a review Here's the novel but If you want to choose one ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Nationality Headcount at YWS
American: 18 Canadian: 3 English: 7 Filipino: 4 Finnish: 2 French: 2 Indian: 5 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1 South Korean: 1 Welsh: ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Username Derivations
I was supposed to be reading the Little Prince for French class (petit prince) but I found this site while procrastinating. I liked the name.. except I'm a girl so ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Three Word Story
know that I
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Testament
What I was doing was a testament of love. Our love because it's still there. I just need to bring it back. He is my life and without him I ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Chatper 1: Junior Year
Openings are very important, you want something that will draw in the reader. An annoying character isn't that interesting unless you make him so. What about the way he looks? ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Hello, my name is.
While this wasn't much of a story I really really liked it. I think that was probably because that is me. Every single aspect of that story is me. It's ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Psychic Life of Rose Wheeler: Chapter 1
Hello! Here for a review I was running around my room in a rush, trying to find my IPod touch I don't know if you've noticed, but those lines rhyme. ...
Sep 26, 2010
