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Re: One Country, Two Worlds part 2
I accidently put the first part in short stories.. and I don't know how to move it... but this is for school and comments are greatly appreciated. I'd love suggestions. ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Pregnant Majesty - Chapter One
Wow, you are a really good writer! You're prose and characterization were great, no particular comments but I absolutely look forward to reading more. Send me your next chapter :)
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)
Hi! I was wondering if you could review my story, It's for school so comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you so much! ~Little Princess
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Hi! I was wondering if you could review my story, It's for school so comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you so much! ~Little Princess
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
Please comment! This is for school and I need edits. Thank you! Up north the world is gloomy and grey Hard work in thick air Black lungs, brown buildings, the ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Our Way
I need title help. Always. So if anyone has any ideas they'd be greatly appreciated. I'm not 100% sure where this story will go, which is part of the problem.. ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Morning With the Family
I really enjoyed this! For one, it was so.. true like the raw truth but told so beautifully in its simplicity. Okay, maybe that didn't make any sense but there ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: What should we call the Wall?
I like the notebook, I think its appropriate and makes more sense then writing on a wall! Scribbles is cute, too also is there anyway to get "notifications" as you ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Purple - Chapter 1, Part 3
Homework is no fun.. on to part 3! So for the opening, like I said before, Spice it up! What was the bus like, smelly? loud? What about the seat? ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Purple - Chapter 1, Part 2
Hello, on to part 2 like I said.. Miyah is very emotional. She hates thinking she’s been lied to or not knowing the full story. So she does everything in ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Purple - Chapter1, Part 1
You say this is a true story? It's actually story of my life. Well somewhat but I know the lonely single feeling a little too well. I liked it, a ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: YWS Secret Santa!
Color: Pink and Green, baby blue, lilac, you know, the girly stuff ;) Animals: Penguins, Red Pandas, i'm also a big fan of kitties Genres: Romance, Historical Fiction, General Fiction ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Falling Fail
I am one of those teenagers who is plagued with social awkwardness and I have been since Middle School, when it actually mattered. This year I'm a junior, an upperclassman ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Three Simple Rules
Hello! LittlePrincess here for a review.. He will not have me. He says he does, I think you mean "he says he will " because otherwise I wonder, does what? ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Abortion
I'm not very good at reviewing poetry but I just have to say that this was gorgeous. Now I'm here in tattered tears Thinking of dreams too true Whispered silently ...
Nov 13, 2010
