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Re: The YWS Ship
I love it!
May 9, 2011 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]
free fallin by tom petty
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts of a Compulsive Liar
I read stalking my stalker earlier today and I didn't even realize it was by you xD It was so funny. This story is too, it makes me laugh. Great ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Fair Friendship
Not much of a poetry writer but I have spurs of inspiration. I do it more for fun then anything else, so no need for harsh or structural critiques. A ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Math Class Dreams
I wrote this in math class two years ago. The punctuation is probably wrong and I'm aware that hotness is not the most sophisticated word. I literally wrote it out ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Open for reviews!
I have the first chapter of a novel: Review is much appreciated! Anything you want reviewed? I can't guarantee I'll do it anytime soon but I'll get to it eventually
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Pregnant Majesty - Chapter Two
I realize that you posted on my wall in January but this is my first time coming on since then.. so here I am. Better late then never! To be ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Planet of the Lost - Part 2: The Wraiths
This story is fantastic - as promised here I am for part 2. I like how you don't have quotation marks because it makes it seem more... in the story. ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: 'Cause when you're sixteen (Part Two)
Onto part two.. My heart stops, then continues. You broke Timi's heart. I chuckle to myself and her head shoots up. This part confused me. Why did her heart just ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Planet of the Lost - Part 1: The Crash
I'd first like to say that I have never read a sci-fi story on YWS but I thought hey, why not? And that was a good decision because this was ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Break That Fall {Chapter1}*edited*
I like the title. It intrigued me. Onto the review! You prologue could be worded better because it doesn't really hook the reader in so-to-speak. Its kind of like this ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: For When I'm Bored
I can't guarantee that I will review anytime soon because I have immense amounts of school work but with the year ending I thought I'd give myself something to do, ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: You Can't Erase ch.1
The brown lump of over-turned earth sat smack in the middle of the sprawling green field. A red robin dove from the cloudless sky and landed on the grass a ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Turns out Junior Year is just as bad as everyone said it would be. I haven't written anything since September. But here I am. I'm back and I'm glad! Hopefully ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
Hi, I'd love a review of my story Part 1 Part 2 It's unfinished.. suggestions are welcome since i'm not 100% how its going to go. Thanks!
Jan 17, 2011