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I was absolutely starving and I started to get really concerned about what there was to eat around here. Maybe that Bellalyse girl has some food, I thought, hoisting myself ...

Hey, I brought him up! :P

(Hi everyone, I'm just going to jump right in! :D ) Margaret Gray There were extraordinary amounts of commotion out in the hall, I figured someone had gotten loose again ...

Karissa Venner That awkward boy with the camera practically flung himself in front of me. Everyone had spread out to gather things and I had followed only to get distracted. ...

Karissa Venner I stared in disbelief as the blonde girl, Bellalyse she said her name was, told us that there was no way off the island. That can't be possible, ...

Karissa Venner The cool and salty sea breeze flew over the rail and onto my face. Behind me, I could hear dance music and laughter. It was another one of ...

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! It's a bit unclear as to what Ivy's disability is. Is it that she can't talk? I think you should make it ...

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! Your opening line could be a little more gripping. At this point it didn't really stand out for me and you want ...

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! A short thud filled across filled across doesn't really make sense. You could say spread across or just simply filled and you ...

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! A short thud filled across filled across doesn't really make sense. You could say spread across or just simply filled and you ...

Harry Potter! Yess! Smack, smack, smack... My feet pounded softly against the floor as I made my way, slouching, down the corridor. The pounding of the feet and the description ...

That was really great! I always secretly believed that Malfoy and Hermione belonged together. I mean, it's perfect and you executed it so well! I would like a tiny bit ...

"Remember I told today will be special?" Mary paused to let Sara nod; her head moving like Noddy's. This is probably not something you can help but it sounds a ...

Hey there! I picked this off of the Team Watchmen review list. Go Team! :) I've never really reviewed fantasy before but I'd love to give it a try. Since ...

Hey there. Little Princess here for a review! Since this begins in the future and then goes back to the present i'm not really sure if it counts as historical... ...