LittlePetRock

Banned for having to do two more reviews.

For having an awesome Storybook... That I never post in. XD

Ryan Sheckler... Dang.

Pretty darling, pretty. 7/10

SO cute! 10/10

VPM! 9/10

PRETTYyyyyyyy! 7/10

Pweazze? -bows-

Dude, we have many things in common. We need to talk, soon. Welcome to YWS! Can't wait to read a bunch of your work!! ~LPR

I've slowly been putting this together for quite some time. I haven't exactly figured out how to bring out the MC. But here is the antagonist's beginning. Dim candlelight scintillated ...

When you can spot more than one grammar-mistake on the front page of your local newspaper... I also found A BUNCH of type-os at Wal-Mart.

I listen to Pat Buchanan. Dreamy, I loffs you.

Hey there! I still like this story, however (nitpick time): It seems incomplete to me also. I think you need to add more emotion to your MC, she seems dry ...

Hey there! So, I like kinda the 'Sci-Fi' feel to this story it freshens things up! The small sickroom they had placed me is small, This doesn't read so smoothly... ...

Oh dear. I've been begging my mom to let me get one; but she refused flatly. She doesn't seem to believe in online payment. My mom doesn't like do buy ...