LittlePetRock

Woohoo! We all did great! 63, 666 characters typed by Juniper 12, 666 periods Spooky. Oh and, I was SO tempted to use the word 'Fahrvergnügen' in a review, just ...

Banned for making me look up 'inanimate'. INANIMATE - –adjective 1. not animate; lifeless. 2. spiritless; sluggish; dull. 3. Linguistics . belonging to a syntactic category or having a semantic ...

Hi there! Have no fear, LPR is here! 8) RED = parts that I fixed. BLUE = bits that I liked. UNDERLINED = Nit-picks. I took a deep breath of ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm LittlePetRock, but feel free to call me LPR. 8) Hmm... well. This poem needs a bit of work. You tried to hard to rhyme, ...

Banned for knowing a limited amount of French.

sodapoplunchbox, your's is finished! tigs6969: I'm working on them now!

Hey guys, so I was going through some of my work. I stumbled across this, I had been writing this SEVERAL months ago. It is the longest I have ever ...

Hi there! Not going to lie, this poem is nice, but deathly boring. It doesn't 'wow' me. At all. It is very unclear. I'm with Firestarter. I fail to see ...

I'm at four, right now. I think I'll go for ten, counting Art/Photography.

Banned for having more reviews than me.

I agree with both Firestarter and Nate. These are lines we've all heard before. A rather monotonous, collaboration of phrases that are overused and severely boring. This line bugs the ...

I love this. Not as much as chapter one. But it is well wrote, though it does not really further the novel. I let out a shriek that permeated through ...

Hey there ducky! Happy review day! :D First - I like this picture, contrast and colour is good. But, the white bar pulls much away from the subject, confusing the ...

Awesome. 8/10

Hi there! LPR at you request! Oooh. Rocky likes. Muchly! I adore the way you describe the scene, without it sounding like a total information dump. Your use of adjectives ...