LittleLionWomen

I LOVE this poem! it's so powerful and true, how some people never live life to the fullest! it's truly amazing. I love this line the most, "Heart and mind ...

Amazing. It gave me actual chills. My favourite part was the word choice, however fluency needs some work. One line that stuck out was "barely glanced at the man getting ...

A young girl sits on her blue crochet bed spread, and wonders why? Why am I on Earth? What is my purpose? She has been asking herself this question for ...

HaHaHa! I loved it! My favourite segment thing is "Another week wasted... The keys are grinning, The computer is winning." I thought that was really funny and cleaver. I can ...

Wow. That was very sad. One thing I should say is the very first line, "He left that night his held high," Do you mean He left that night his ...

Awesome! Great Job! I love the enthusiasm you express through out the poem. Like the person before me said, I like the fluency of your poem, it seems to fit ...

That was so. . powerful. So much feeling, really well written. I'm not the best at grammar so I won't even attempt to grammar check. But it was amazing, and ...

That was amazingly well written, sad, but amazing. I'm a beginner to all this posting my work online and reading others, but that's just so freaking amazing. Awesome job.

That was amazingly well written, sad, but amazing. I'm a beginner to all this posting my work online and reading others, but that's just so freaking amazing. Awesome job.

An island off the east coast, Beside the yawning blue sky, Constant love jumps from tree to tree, Dances in the caves and Floats amongst the island’s chain.

To be free as a bird, Is a horrible simile, For birds are constantly living, In their own captivity, Unlike our sheltered selves, They are living in relentless fright, Inside ...