LittleLionWomen

AWESOME. Great Job! I love it!

Yeah i was going for the blank poem. Also honestly nothing was really going on. . . I wrote it in like spring and I just had this weird feeling ...

The fire from my heart dies, The fire lights my chest a flame. As I hide behind the smoke Simply watching the energy rise and fall around me. The chaos ...

Wow. That's very. . . powerful. I'm kind of speechless.

amazing poem. great fluency and strong wording. Really powerful, sends me the chills.

This is really good! you're really talented and should be a professional artist!

I love this poem sooo much! it's so cleaver and cute! You mixed the perfect brew of witty-ness and meaning. It's by far the best poem I read since I ...

I agree with butterfinger, it's a great poem but the meaning is a bit hard to understand. I feel there's a very powerful meaning behind it all, maybe I'm not ...

i really like your poem! it's so touching. The SMTWTFS is a bit unnecessary, i mean we kind of know the days of the week. . . you should brainstorm ...

Really great song, I would like to actually hear it. Your really good with word choice. One thing that might make this stronger would be a bit of rhyming. I'm ...

I thought that this poem was really well written. One thing I don't like is the fact it's so mainstream; the whole life a journey, the destination doesn't matter it's ...

Dear Brother, I would like to know When all this started. When you changed from the loving brother To an inconsiderate bastard. When life became so dull You needed drugs ...

Wow this is really good! great word choice, fluency, everything! I'm not an expert, but I can tell you have a great talent and a lot of emotion in this ...

You have a real talent with sensory images. you really can paint a picture. Awesome job! Im not that great at critiquing people, because I have horrible grammar and spelling. ...

I really like this poem. It's very impressive. I also love the mystery to it. I love how everyone can take it in and interrupt it in different ways. Great ...