LittleLionWomen

I love it! it's one of those poems that's so easy to read! great fluency! I really like this segment the most- "I wish I had the courage To do ...

wow, this is really good! A bit depressing, but good nonetheless. I wish I could actually hear it! Awesome job! :D

The sun shines brightly on the water, Threatening the moist air with a heat monster. The ocean waves fight back fiercely, Leaving wet footprints as battle scarring. The fight continues ...

I really like this poem it's very powerful emotionally wise, you could work on your mechanics though. just the simple things is all you need. But, I read poetry for ...

This is a really funny poem, i'm not sure if you meant it that way but it's funny. " Chunky guys flying" - I literary laughed out loud. " One ...

I would just like to say one thing. I know that this story can get a bit complex, but there's no need to flame about it. If you don't get ...

So much depends upon the wandering mind, looking for a stable landing, where no repercussions roam. ^So Much Depends Upon Poem^ A young girl of the name Sophie walks her ...

I really like your poem! You've got some mad painting picture skills! I bet if you just tried to be a bit more original then you could make it a ...

Honestly most of my poems are like pictures in my head then I describe them. I suppose with Silent Screaming i'm trying to signify the fact that people are frozen ...

The clicking of the clock ceases to start, As all time is frozen like solid water, The wind is still between each bare blowing, All that is moving, a silent ...

I really like this poem it's very cleverly thought out. I really love this line, "She went to walk the dog, one day But took the cat instead.'" I thought ...

I really like this poem it's very cleverly thought out. I really love this line, "She went to walk the dog, one day But took the cat instead.'" I thought ...

I totally agree with you sare, i reread clay's response multiple times each time I did a little awww. You sound like a REALLY good brother!

really good. I loved it! great job! Also, don't apologise for bad grammar, everyone had bad grammar it's like apologising for breathing. lol! just don't sweat what people think, this ...

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. That was like Pure Awesome. You really have a gift. Great Fluency, Word Choice, very cleaver. I loved every bit! The ending was especially spectacular! it was so dramatic ...