LittleLionWomen

HaHaHaHa I thought this poem was hilarious! I like the use of bad grammar, you still understand the poem, but it's not all proper. I like it. My life be ...

wow great job! I like them all! I think the best photo subject would be number five. Because that's just fucking awesome. However, number seven looks the coolest photography wise. ...

Great poem, I'm not a dancer, but i felt connected to it anyway. I think you might have used 'there's' a lot though. It just felt like it, especially at ...

Wow, This looks incredibly good! I love the cover soo much, just that would make me want to read the book. It draws you in, and makes you super curious. ...

This is another pretty deep thing, so if you don't exactly get it, chill out. No need to set this piece a flame. But I would like to say that ...

Yellow and orange paint the sky as the world around her darkens. She silently sits sipping tea, as she reflects over her life. She has always been graded well, and ...

So this is some pretty fine work right here. Perhaps not my cup of tea. I feel like your kind of bringing in those stupid jokes and stereotyping teenagers.

The summer wind, Competes with my breath. Locking me inside, Drowning in my death. I long to be in open-air, Climbing, sprinting freely. Instead of caged away, Losing my sanity. ...

I can tell when I’m not wanted The tone of your voice Beating my head every time you speak to me I don’t get why. What did I do wrong? ...

Wow that was intense. Great job. It gave me the chills multiple times, and kept me hooked. Wow. Just, Wow.

hahaha! That's hilarious! I totally agree i cringe when people where 5 sizes too small in anything especially shorts! Great job! Love the cleaver rhymes especially the priest start swearing!

I think what would make your poem oh so much better would be a rhyming scheme. Because it feels like your going for the cute/funny poem that people can relate ...

I like the simplicity of this poem! it's cute and bubbly and just fun! it gives you a break of all the complicated, confusing, deep, dramatic, sad, depressing, cliche, and ...

Your a really talented photographer! Awesome job! 1- really good, the black and white is always very classy, and hard to do wrong with that. I like the mess of ...

I can really relate to this! I've been feeling all those simple happy days are gone, and now everything is either graded or judged. I guess you could say i ...