LittleLionWomen

I absolutely loved it! it's short, sweet, and to the point! Also, you've got some fancy skill with rhyme and fluency! Great job! -LLW

it is a bit morbid. But I won't angrily tell you to see a shrink or anything. Every one has some crazy feelings, and this is much healthier then keeping ...

This poem put me in a momentary trance. Either from the thought of where the clouds go, or the total understanding of the 'silly child's wish' To love without being ...

Wow. I absolutely love this poem. I can totally relate, being the little innocent kitten that was never thought of doing anything considered 'bad' in my little town. The one ...

-er I really hate flamers don't you? Just picking at people wounds, but honestly these lyrics are a bit to cliche for me. I do however get a vary emotional ...

A poet with much potential Who’s thoughts; highly influential If only she gave herself time To think through every little rhyme ---------------------------------------------- I’m Just waiting, Wai

Great Job! My favourite was number five, it looks so sad but so powerful too, I love the ominous feel it throws off. ALso number three is pretty cool. I ...

wow that was really good. Awesome job at painting the picture! "Have you had to say goodbye? To your grandma before she dies." < That my friend gave me the ...

Expectations drive you mad Either you expect the best And get the worst. Or expect the worst and get the best. Both switch the boards, makes you confused, and before ...

This was great. One of those 'wow' moments. You're very Shakespearian in the sense you cut lines off, but you don't pause; It's cool. Also, Great wording. Really amazing. You ...

The song is alright. It's pretty typical though; branching off and the butterfly metaphor. I mean it is great, and I probably couldn't come up with a song half as ...

Writing poems are simple. Rhyming words, and clever metaphors only take a bit of time. Painting pictures is easy. Blending colours, and small details done with a swift hand Playing ...

Great job! you can really choose your words well! I mean Phantasm

Yay! First Review for this one! Yippie! Anyways. . . This was very cute. A bit cheesy love for a while, but I like it. I like the whole burying ...

Everyone says, Discover yourself Do what you want to do But, nobody ever said It would be hard. They say when you find yourself, You know. You know when you ...