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Re: For whom the bell tolls
his was quite good, a bit confusing at some parts ( probably just for me) But well done. I love this line- "Entombed, suffering evermore in his mind’s necropolis" it's ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Stormy Blue Skies
The sky is so pretty. Light baby blue. Cloud climbing cloud, Like stacked mattresses. With majestic green trees, Standing tall to the sky, Blue and green twirl as one, As ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Character Portrait
This is very good, the plot sounds interesting, I would love to hear it as it comes, but anyways, if you would like me to be nit pickky, I would ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: She Is Numb
Wow. I got the chills. I love this poem! it practically nailed me in every way possible. So, thank you! "One day you'll know that The She was me."
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: The Hole Of A Mind
A young girl sits on her blue crochet bed spread, and wonders why? Why am I on Earth? What is my purpose? She has been asking herself this question for ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: A quick character sketch
it's alright. A bit rugged. What program do you use? Because some programs are just imposable to make something look real. The background is kind of blahhh, Not to be ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Creation
wow I was just stumbling between writers, and I found this poem. And yes I found love. This is spectacular spectacular--haha mulan rouge. . anyways, back on track this poem ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Not Wanted
I can tell when I’m not wanted. The tone of your voice Beating my head every time you speak to me. I don’t get why. What did I do wrong? ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Separation
I love short poems, I love writing them, and I love reading them. This one confused me abit, if your heart is torn shouldn't it be tattered also? and the ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: In Captivity
"You know, I never meant to hurt you. It was just so quickly done. The knife in my hand, Taken and broken Through flesh and blood and bone. I never ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Dear Brother
Dear Brother, I would like to know When all this started. When you changed from the loving brother To an inconsiderate bastard. When life became so dull You needed drugs ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Walls
Alright, it's a bit confusing, but don't be insulted. It may be I'm reading it wrong. "The burning wall – ---burning kind of contradicts the ice later. . it seems ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Sometime In September
I’ll put on my best hat, And you’ll put on yours, As we walk hand in hand Through every open door. We’ll keep our eyes locked on the destination ahead. ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Rachel
wow. We've got quite the romantic! This is adorably, amazingly, awesome! "The light fades and the sun starts to set, millions of wings patter as the butterflies fly off into ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Inspiration Hiding
The empty paper taunts the writer, As the missing ball taunts the player. The pure canvas smirks towards the artist As she glares from her wooden stool. It’s hard to ...
Sep 28, 2011
