LittleFox

Thank you :) As for the weather, I imagine it in a sort of Mediterranean setting with and a desert to the north east on the other side of the ...

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the fight scene- This was my first time writing one so I was a little worried :P

See that one of the problems I have is describing the weather here xD Yeah, it's winter, but they live in a very hot area, so full on winter for ...

Thank you :) I will be sure to add more to it!

Thank you!

Thank you for your help, I appreciate it :D

Thank you so much :)

Thank you so much for the review :)

Thank you so much! I will be sure to run through it a few more times and try to improve it :)

Thank you :)

Thank you so much :D

Thanks a bunch! I will give it some more work :)

Thanks so much for your help! :)

Thanks a bunch :) I'll try to add some more descriptions

Thanks!