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Re: Title Feedback [2]
I definitely would pick this book up after looking at the title to see what it's about. It seems like it could go several different directions. It's a little mysterious ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: The Name Game
The Name Game: I came up with this little game to practice writing, and I thought it would be fun to play on here! You take a random name and ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #4
Frodo
Jun 12, 2016 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
7/10 I like the bit of mystery and suspense. The character has an unusual name, and the fact that she is wearing a cloak makes me think there may be ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Title Feedback
This one makes me think of mythology and nature, and as one who likes both of those things, I would defiantly pick it up. However, I feel like you could ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #3
wind
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #3
leaves
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Title Feedback
The 'phobe' part makes me think of fear and overall it makes me think of sci-fi. I think I would pick it up to look at it, and probably open ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Title Feedback
I would at least pick it up to look at it. Bamboo hints at and Asian setting and cutter hints perhaps a person with a blade. So I would defiantly ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #3
feather
Mar 15, 2015 -
Re: Fantasy
I'm currently reading the fourth book in the Wheel of Time Series by Robert Jordan. I'm pretty picky when it comes to fantasy, but I really love this series so ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
A really hard decision since they are both so different and so great, but I think I like lotr a little better.
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
7/10 I like it the overall feeling of it. It seems to set a good tone for a story I would be interested in. However, I feel like some editing ...
Jan 31, 2015 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
5/10 It's a little boring for the opening line of a novel. There's nothing that really grasps the reader. But for all I know maybe the second sentence is what ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
It's very small, but it piques my interest a little. That fact that 'Promised' is capitalized makes it sound mysterious so the reader wants to read on. ~ The small ...
Dec 23, 2014
