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LittleFox

  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback [2]

    I definitely would pick this book up after looking at the title to see what it's about. It seems like it could go several different directions. It's a little mysterious ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Writing Activities Re: The Name Game

    The Name Game: I came up with this little game to practice writing, and I thought it would be fun to play on here! You take a random name and ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #4

    Frodo

    Jun 12, 2016
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    7/10 I like the bit of mystery and suspense. The character has an unusual name, and the fact that she is wearing a cloak makes me think there may be ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    This one makes me think of mythology and nature, and as one who likes both of those things, I would defiantly pick it up. However, I feel like you could ...

    Apr 5, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #3

    wind

    Apr 5, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #3

    leaves

    Apr 5, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    The 'phobe' part makes me think of fear and overall it makes me think of sci-fi. I think I would pick it up to look at it, and probably open ...

    Apr 5, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    I would at least pick it up to look at it. Bamboo hints at and Asian setting and cutter hints perhaps a person with a blade. So I would defiantly ...

    Mar 30, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #3

    feather

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Fantasy

    I'm currently reading the fourth book in the Wheel of Time Series by Robert Jordan. I'm pretty picky when it comes to fantasy, but I really love this series so ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Media Reviews Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?

    A really hard decision since they are both so different and so great, but I think I like lotr a little better.

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: First Paragraph Feedback

    7/10 I like it the overall feeling of it. It seems to set a good tone for a story I would be interested in. However, I feel like some editing ...

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    5/10 It's a little boring for the opening line of a novel. There's nothing that really grasps the reader. But for all I know maybe the second sentence is what ...

    Jan 12, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: First Paragraph Feedback

    It's very small, but it piques my interest a little. That fact that 'Promised' is capitalized makes it sound mysterious so the reader wants to read on. ~ The small ...

    Dec 23, 2014


A beautiful funeral doesn't guarantee Heaven.
— Haitian Proverb