LittleBitCold

Chapter 4...hope its better than the last... ***** ‘Okay! Here I come!’ Alicia raced down the stairs, slipping through the sitting room and accidentally finding what was probably supposed to ...

Wow!! I really like this even though I didn't read the other chapters. The characters are really cool and I like the way you describe things. I don't know if ...

Thanks everybody for reviewing!!!! All of your advice was very helpful. I MAJORYLY edited the third chapter and I hope it's better. The fourth should be up soon. Thanks again!!!!

OH MY GOSH!! This was so exciting you cant stop yet!! Delys reminds me of a vampire I read about in another book. He liked to get people drunk and ...

Chapter 3...please tell me if it's awful or not!!! ***** Looking out a door and seeing something that shouldn’t exist is one of those things that doesn’t happen very often. ...

You edited it!!!! I think it's better...although I thought it was awesome at first!!! I think you made Raymond less girly in this version...although I didn;t mind him being a ...

Here is chapter 2...let me know what you think!!!! ****** Ice like frozen dreams tore at her lungs as she ran and tears fought to escape. It wasn‘t until her ...

Goddddd...that was crazy. I swear to the fact that I have NEVER read anything like it. Pleeeaasseee write more! I am absolutely dying to know what happens. I love how ...

Oh no! You didn't read the rules! You need to review TWO other stories before you post. Not doing so can get you kicked off. I suggest running off ASAP ...

Yes, I liked it. Yes, I am surprised. Yes, I want to read more. I only found two mistakes... I heard a crescendoing, “Come Innn.”, from behind the door. It ...

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I liked it!!! I can't wait to hear what happens to Aslina!!! On the other hand, I have to agree with the above reviewer A LITTLE BIT. I read te ...

I am reviewing CHAPTER TWO - This was decidedly creepy. I think ya might need to let a little light in, these kids are SO SAD. Is there going to ...