LittleBitCold

.... this was weird. I liked it! but it was weird. I think you probably need to make it a little more clear. What is 18 year old doing hanging ...

Yay!!! More Cher stuff I absolutely looooooooved this... when are you putting on more??!?! I don't really have any nitpicks, but i loved how Ares said all the stuff that ...

First of all, you completely flooded the whole genre with your edited chapters. That's a little annoying. And second, I don't really like this story. I've read most of the ...

WOW!!! This is proly the best story ever made!!! I like it much better then all your other offense to them.... I'm almost inspired to continue my vampire story... Anyway, ...

OH MY GOSH!!! I loved it...you neeeeed to write more. It's super crazy and weird and pointless but it reminds me of me a little, you know? Except im not ...

No next chapter yet? I'm sad. I want more pwetty badly...HOW CAN YOU END SO------cliff-hangerish?? If you weren't my friend I wouldnt be beating you up. But I need more. ...

Wow. wow. wow. I almost dont have anything to say. Almost meaning that i do have SOMETHING. It was incredible. There, I said it. This might be me favorite thing ...

WOW. Wowwowowowowowowowow. That's all I can say.....haha! I always have something to say! Soooo, I love it that Yel and Jason are back, i was so mad when Jason disappeared ...

WHAT!!?? what what what what!!!??? Noone else has reviewed?!?! Absolutely stupid. >> Gosh, this was amazing....i'm afraid my stories have TOO much down time but yours just NEVER stop moving!! ...

Yay! More reviews. THANKS. I will let you guys know--at least the guys that asked--when the next chapter is up. But I'm off the pc for a week so it ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! I am editing this alot but I will let you know when I put more on. I know it was a little confusing and that ...

I didn’t like endings. And it didn’t even matter what kind. I just didn’t like it when things ended. When Fight Club ended, I cried. When Anchorman ended, I cried ...

.....Wow. That was sooooo good. Delys is completely amazing and I love him. I have to disagree with Chern...sociopaths NEVER get boring...*cough* sprite *cough* I think the language in this ...

Chap. 5-------------I'm worried about this one. Does it fit the rest of the story? ******* Alicia awoke to harsh light and distant sobbing. She rolled over; thoughts, dreams and reality ...

OMG!!!! You ended at the most exciting place eveveveeerrr!! I love the little baby...he is soooo cute and I love how I can't even tell what hes saying sometimes. reminds ...