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Ah crap forgot that XD. Thank you for finding that mistake, I'll fix it. Also, I have noticed that I've been adding a lot of dialogue, so I'm trying my ...

Ehh, it's not really exact. And I'm kinda planning other things XD

Hah, I'm fine with people being harsh. It helps me learn XD. I'll just try to keep the things you've told me in mind. For the second comment, yeah, some ...

hahah lol wrong timezone XD. It's night here. I will be going to sleep soon lol. I'll review your other chapters tomorrow since I'm tired from all the reviewing today. ...

Oh and also, about me using Satoru's name too much is probably me being paranoid about the readers being confused... I'll fix that and also keep it on my mind ...

Thank you! I would have replied sooner but maintenance... I will start adding in your suggestions right now :)

Wow that was an unexpected turn from the first chapter. I like it! I wonder how this story will twist and turn.

Hahah, I was really confused at first about what was going on then I realized I had been reading from chapter 3 and not the beginning. Now that I've read ...